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I really liked the story, but there was something I didn't like. It was in present tense. I usually don't have a problem with this, but there were some points ...

Lol. It's ok. It's my fault, really. I haven't updated. Heck, I haven't even started the next chapter. Shame on me.

I quietly closed the door to my locker and closed the lock. The end of the day came more quickly than I realized, and I sighed as I lifted my ...

I absolutly, positivly love it. This is excellnt. I do not see anything wrong with the idea, the story, or grametical errors. Please Keep writing and working on this one ...

Hey! Very nice update. I'd do a full critique, but I didn't see anything that the other two haven't critiqued first. I don't want to echo. The pace of the ...

All fixed! Thanks, Heather. Sometimes I type so quickly that I don't see my mistakes, and MS Word doesn't catch all of that before. I really need to look over ...

Then, of course, things didn’t go too well with Johnny and his white dragon and he ended up [six feet deep]

Personally, I didn't like the series very much. I had a hard time getting into the story. I do think that it's very creative. I liked how they referred to ...

“Ok, what’s wrong?” Adam asked. I sighed heavily and counted to ten. It was my method; to calm myself down when I was angry. “I can’t deal with this crap ...

It was a bit confusing. I liked it though. The descriptions were good.

Ooh. Yes, that helps. Thanks.

, and as soon as he finished saying that, I knew he was lying. Again, some more unneeded words. Why else would you bother mentioning he was a bad liar ...

“Here you go, Mrs. Hue.” She said with a bright grin. Slowly, her teacher extended her hand and grasped the paper; There should be a period, not a semi colon. ...

Soo... I decided I wanted to make another About The Author post, since... I'm cool like that. And instead of my autobiography, which just talked about my musical interests and ...

That was really good. I especially liked the last bit of the story. Um... there were few errors concerning grammar, but that's ok. There weren't many. I like how the ...